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Minggu, 23 Januari 2011

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Today I went to Bank with my Landlord because yesterday I took money like my mom but I was taking a money from wrong bank . And I must sent it back to the bank , and I accompanied her shopping too .
She bought a gifted like her friend said .
I wanted a chocolate today , but I forgot to bought it when I was in way home

4 komentar:

  1. took money = withdraw money (as taught during today's lesson!'

    watch out for your tenses, girl. Use the past tense.

    'Today I went to the bank with my landlord, because yesterday I withdrew money like my mom usually does. However, I had taken money from the wrong bank and therefore I must send it back to the bank. Following that, I accompanied her to shop as well.

    She bought a gift(!!!) like her friend said .

    I wanted to get myself some chocolate today , but I forgot to buy (note that after a 'to', the verb should be present tense) it when I was on my way home.'

    P.S On a side note, what chocolate did you want to get?

    BalasHapus
  2. Haha , Looks almost every grammar is wrong :D . I'll learn more hahha .
    TOBLERONE , I really like that . Yummy ~(=_=~)

    BalasHapus
  3. Yeap. I think you have lots to improve on for your grammer. But at least you're beginning to express yourself much better now. Keep working at it!

    BalasHapus